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Friday 8 November 2013

Fireworks


Walt: write a narrative
2.Use words to paint a picture.
3.Use senses.

Fireworks

One extreme night Jason went and byed two boxes of fireworks. One they did on monday and one for this extreme night. There next door was dumb because when they light it up it went in to their plants and it was on fire. The fire was getting bigger and bigger. They got a bit of water and put it on the fire. The fire went out. There mums plants was burn into little black pieces.

Then Jason mum came outside to look at her plants if it was still standing. As she went outside she was so disappointed that her wonderful plants was destroyed. So she told no more fireworks now. Jason was so mad that they have to just watch boring old tv. It was tuesday Jasons mum went to fix her fallows. She was still planting and planting to finish her gadin. Jason went outside to her.

She finish planting. Jason told her if they can do fire today she said yes you can do fireworks. They had to wait for a very long time so it can be night time. It was time to do there  fireworks. He looked at the beautiful fireworks shooting out for long. Jason didn’t like the smell of the smoke coming out from it.

There fireworks was done. They had a great time and they all went to sleep. He said
“did we all had a great time”. “Yes” they all said

The theme was to never do firework at the backyard.
   

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